I step out towards it
Knowing it could attack at any second
So as I search for it's head I wait wondering if it's lurking beneath me ready to pounce
I feel it move under me
It comes up out of the ground
I see it hovering over me it grabs me! It's damp claws hold me tight and pull me out
I lifts me higher and higher and It won't let go
It finally lets me fall lower and lower
I feel like I'm finally free until...
I fall right into it's mouth, down it's throat and into the stomach.
My own mouth fills with sloppy food and crunchy bites and I can't breathe
I see a shadow coming towards me- they must have been swallowed to!
But they lift me up and out of the stomach and now I am really free!
I lifts me higher and higher and It won't let go
It finally lets me fall lower and lower
I feel like I'm finally free until...
I fall right into it's mouth, down it's throat and into the stomach.
My own mouth fills with sloppy food and crunchy bites and I can't breathe
I see a shadow coming towards me- they must have been swallowed to!
But they lift me up and out of the stomach and now I am really free!
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wonderfull nad creative try and make it a bit longer,
please comment,
mscandy
Thankyou miss candy I will try to use your advice! In the mean time I WILL comment! But please stop asking me or I might not do it! Bye bye!
Yah your creativity is great ! youve got heaps of it
very imaginative, i like!
How tragic is it that the whole Annie experience is over??? You are spectacular in the show Piglet, everyone thought you were gorgeous (and I have the photos to prove it haha!!) My mum asked me who the cute little blonde orphan was because she said you did a wonderful job and sang Never Fully Dressed really well! Hope you enjoyed the photos. If you would like a copy of them (if you dont have them already) I can easily enough put them on CD.
Keep up the good work inside and outside of the classroom....Wonderful writing by the way.. You are all so multifaceted and talented!!
very imaginative!
What great creativity. It really is a "Monster".
ur cwl & am i alwd 2 txt on ur blg? ooh da prvlgs of txtin & ur nt a rtrd as fr as im cncrd!
ooh i've never really seen a monster before...
it's very creative though, even if it is short!
mirp:P
Is it long enough now? Any more advice that I could use? That advice that you gave me miss acndy was helpful!
:)
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